Here is my initial review of www.complete-health-wellness.com
when the home page was the only content.
Your site looks great, I love that graphic.
Your Title, Description and Keywords are perfect first time, well done!!
Here's some things to think about in the body copy.
Most of what you have written is very good and it could just be a personal
preference, but I feel you have put too many words in bold type.
My eyes tended to skip from one bolded phrase to the next and I missed some of your message.
You should have some bold words, especially your main keywords in the first paragraph, but too much makes it look like you're shouting or putting emphasis on everything instead of just the main points.
You've used the word "I" a lot. Try to re-word as many of them as you can and replace them with "you" or "your".
It's OK to have a few, but the "you's" should outnumber the "I's" by at least 5 to one.
Also, break up your paragraphs a little more.
For example, your paragraph -
We all want information on the health and wellness products we use and the
natural health supplements we take. Unfortunately some people just buy the first product on the shelf and think that a vitamin is a vitamin...Why?
BECAUSE IT'S CONFUSING! Are all cars created equally? How about TV's? Of course not. So why would all supplements be created equally?
Exactly...THEY AREN'T!
Would read better as -
We all want information on the health and wellness products we use and the natural health supplements we take.
Unfortunately some people just buy the first product on the shelf and think that a vitamin is a vitamin...
Why?
BECAUSE IT'S CONFUSING!
Are all cars created equally? How about TV's?
Of course not. So why would all supplements be created equally?
Exactly...THEY AREN'T!
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Space your words out, use less bolding and include lots of white space so people's eyes get a chance to have a rest. It will make it much
easier to read.
Apart from that, it's a very good effort. It's not too long and gets the message across, great work.
Time to move on and start building your tier two and three pages...
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